I couldn't sleep last night. Actually I didn't sleep properly since friday. I couldn't fall asleep for a long time and then woke up several times a night. You know that state just between sleep and awakedness, when your thoughts start to tangle with dreams. For me it is as if some outer force had started to meddle with my thoughts, adding foreign elements and animating them in strangest stories, even though it's actually all my brain's doing. Last night I had a moment of clarity, awakening from the half-dream state, with an alarming feeling that something has changed. I don't know what did change but after that I fell asleep and slept soundly until morning. Something new is blooming inside me, a glorious and shiny change I hope. I've been idle for far too long.
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Hi mate ! Just saw you needed some critique, but don't take mine so seriously, I'm not a professional at all (and also sorry for grammar mistakes and stuff, I'm french)
Let's begin :
Vision : Globally nice, hot colors, sunshine yellow and nice green stuff on the up corners. I really like those colors and the impression it gives (+ center of the picture looks like a flower <3)
Originality : Doesn't look like most of the fractals i've already seen >> 5/5
Technique : Nice shadows and lights, well done. As I said before, the colors are also very nice A bit bad that some parts of the pic (if you look closely) are a little blurred. Only negative thing, don't worry about that
Impact : I'm just like when I see this in fullscreen, this is beautiful. IMHO it would have been better to see it in 16/9, like a wallpaper (you should try this)...
Globally very nice but I'm not a professional, I'm just like "a spectator". But still looks cool to my eyes
I'll be honest here, this reminds me of a wormhole effect. Like, where there was glass in the middle but it was sucked into time/space and opens on the other side of some tunnel that leads to a new and exciting new place/thing/idea. Sounds exciting in itself! Love it!
Hezká slova. Pozastavil jsem se nad tím, protože znám ten zvláštní pocit a taky proto, že mne samotného teď čekají zásadní změny. Doufám, že to pro tebe bude jen dobře ( a neomezí tě to ve tvorbě DDDD ). Když se řekne fraktál vybaví se mi hned ten tvůj jako vzorový se kterými mám občas tendence porovnávat ostatní. Vlastně jsi pro mně ( a určitě nejen pro mně ) taková fraktálová osobnost. Moc dobrá práce.
Není zač! Kdy nebudeš omezena ve tvorbě. Hádám tedy, že jsi na některé z uměleckých škol. No, abych pravdu řekl osobně nechystám nic, jen ty životní cesty se nějak prapodivně sbíhají a zase rozbíhají. Dnes jsem se přestěhoval přes celou republiku do města, které jsem v životě neviděl. Mám o zábavu tedy v Plzni postaráno
Právě že ne, vzdělávám se humanitně na Univerzitě Karlově Akorát to zabírá spoustu energie a času, takže toho teď moc netvořím. A uměleckým školám se vyhýbám širokým obloukem
Tak přeji hodně štěstí v Plzni. Přestěhoval ses tam kvůli škole na kolej nebo jen tak?
Let's begin :
Vision : Globally nice, hot colors, sunshine yellow and nice green stuff on the up corners. I really like those colors and the impression it gives (+ center of the picture looks like a flower <3)
Originality : Doesn't look like most of the fractals i've already seen >> 5/5
Technique : Nice shadows and lights, well done. As I said before, the colors are also very nice
Impact : I'm just like
Globally very nice but I'm not a professional, I'm just like "a spectator". But still looks cool to my eyes
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