I feel like I just fell into water. I exhale. Bubbles all around me. I fall. I struggle. But the water is heavy on my chest. My limbs are numb. I can't swim. I need to breathe. But there is no air.
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This is a AMAZING piece of Art work , all the little details you put in it makes it WONDERFUL, the colours are very vibrant and eye-catching , and out of all of the other deviants , i saw this one first , because it stood out exeptionaly well to me.Your technique is smooth , and gentle , your shading is light - This just sticks out wonderfully to ME and this is just my opinion-overall this is a very good piece of work and, you ahve done a good job at EVERYTHING on this drawing, and should be put up in a art gallery where everyone can see it.
I think this is a great piece of art. It's extremely original; in fact, I don't think I've ever seen a picture like this before. That's saying a lot considering all the art out there. The technique is well done with the bubbles and sparks of light surrounding the flower. The bubbles are amazing, every little detail showing. The only thing that could be improved for the bubbles is the shape of some of them; a few are too oval to be realistic. This can easily be fixed by expanding or reducing the shape of the bubble.
The lines of light flying from the center of the flower are well made, seeming to have a life of their own. However, around the edges of the drawing, the whole tone of the picture changes. The color and pattern of the lights abruptly change and confuse the image. I would suggest staying consistent till the end.
The flower is great, the way it opens up and layers every other petal with the previous one. The color is beautiful as well, contrasting properly against the leaves. The shaft of light in the middle of the flower isn't quite centered, the light not fully surrounding the middle of the flower.
All in all, this is a solid picture that has the potential to become a spectacular picture.
Thank you It is actually not so difficult to add some little bits and pieces such as little bubbles or stars, the most difficult part is the overall shape of the bloom
Is that so. I have been introduced to fractal art only very recently. But up until now I find it horribly difficult. Well your art clearly shows that you are a pro so I'll take your word. I have to admit though the shape of that bloom is soooooo good. Keep it up.
The technique is well done with the bubbles and sparks of light surrounding the flower. The bubbles are amazing, every little detail showing. The only thing that could be improved for the bubbles is the shape of some of them; a few are too oval to be realistic. This can easily be fixed by expanding or reducing the shape of the bubble.
The lines of light flying from the center of the flower are well made, seeming to have a life of their own. However, around the edges of the drawing, the whole tone of the picture changes. The color and pattern of the lights abruptly change and confuse the image. I would suggest staying consistent till the end.
The flower is great, the way it opens up and layers every other petal with the previous one. The color is beautiful as well, contrasting properly against the leaves. The shaft of light in the middle of the flower isn't quite centered, the light not fully surrounding the middle of the flower.
All in all, this is a solid picture that has the potential to become a spectacular picture.
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